Monday, May 3, 2010

My Best Day Ever

On Saturday it was the best day ever. Do you know why? I got to play soccer. I felt excited. We won the soccer game. It was 4 points to us and 3 to them. In the second half I was goally. I saved about 30 goals. I  got 2 goals. It was fun. I felt rapt. I went down the wing a lot. It was our first game of the season. We have turns at all of the positions. We had a big get together after the game. I had McDonalds for lunch. It was beautiful.
By Jack McPherson
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  1. Room 8 - Bluestone SchoolMay 3, 2010 at 4:01 AM

    Awesome work Jack I loved how you described your feelings and used heaps of personal voice.

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