Monday, May 3, 2010

Diary writing in Room 8

We are trying very hard to use punctuation well in our writing and make our stories interesting for an audience. 

Here is Riley's story.

On Sunday Dion my friend came to my house. We had great fun because Dion and me went to the park and the dairy. On Saturday I got to see him again because I play rugby for his team. We played turnover. We won. The score was 5 to 10.
By Riley Mullings
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  1. Room 8 - Bluestone SchoolMay 3, 2010 at 4:32 AM

    Well done you worked hard to make sure the names in your story had capitals.

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