Thursday, June 17, 2010

The Crocodile And The Big Ginormous Elephant

Once upon a time there was an elephant and a crocodile. The crocodile had plans. Little kids came along but before the kids went on the crocodile slide, an enormous big fat elephant came out of the jungle and he was sprinting. The elephant yelled and told the kids to run away. The elephant went to sit on the crocodile's head. After that the elephant went to eat some nuts and the alligator went to the swamp and sat in it. In the night the alligator was riri, (angry) for some reason and he was still angry the next night. He woke everyone up because the elephant didn't let the crunch kids. The next day he had another plan. He pretended to be a step on a person's front door and it was near midnight. He was getting rather hungry. Some more elephants came and had turns sitting on the crocodile. He got squashed so he never ate a child again.
By Zek Spurr Ross

1 comment:

  1. Mrs Richards says, "Wow!!!!! What a huge story! I love some of the cool describing words you used."

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