Today in writing we read about the eruption and used a "Thinkers Key " to help us stretch our thinking processes.
We used the Personal Key today. After we heard about the eruption we had to write explaining:
- How we feel about the eruption.
- What is our real own opinion about what happened.
- What would we do if we were in this situation.
- How would it affect our life.
Here is Dryden Thomson's story.
OH, NO! Do you know what happened on the other side of the world? There has been a volcano that has erupted in Iceland. That was horrible. People were stranded at the airport. That would not be really good. All of the countries have heard it on the news.
They will not think it is good. I think this is horrible for the people that live in Iceland.
If I lived in Iceland when the volcano erupted I would feel terrible.
I do feel terrible about Iceland right now. I don't feel good. I feel sad. I think they will be worried about their country.
This is a good piece of writing Dryden. You could become a newspaper writer!
ReplyDeleteWho would have thought that Mrs Richards would be stuck in England because of this volcano!
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